Saturday, February 20, 2010

A Brief Companionship (Limerick)

A snake and a mouse became friends.

A bond no one could comprehend.

But once dinner came,

Things weren’t quite the same.

The friendship had come to an end.

3 comments:

  1. I liked this and want to know more about why the friendship had come to an end. Good job with the rhyming and storytelling.

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  2. This poem is definitely creative It's easy to follow and flows well. Nice work!!

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  3. Easy to visualize and good flow -although I really like mice (as creatures, not dinner :-)

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